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Pia Sahgal's avatar

Aaaaarrrrrrgh .... where's the rest of it!

Gosh ... so vivid, T ..

I still don't look at beggars directly :-p

Yeh dil maange more!

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Tara Sahgal's avatar

Thank you! It's coming :)

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Bittu Sahgal's avatar

Serialise it!

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Ashu Phatak's avatar

Too good! I remember that mind! 🤗 want more.

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Tara Sahgal's avatar

Thank you so much for reading! And for taking time to comment.... appreciate it :)

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Sonia Bahl's avatar

I am curious. Very curious.

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Tara Sahgal's avatar

Hope you enjoyed the ending! Thank you for reading... and for the comment :) :)

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Sonia Bahl's avatar

This is the perfect dénouement. Also, your almost ending (…the peacocks would come, and later, the turtles and everything else too. We are here to look at the stars!) is just what I needed to read. I love your piquant literary style! You must never stop writing.

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